dont be sad

LULU Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:09 pm

i wrote this poem for evry girl who feel sad and lonly
i realy dont think that iam poet but only like rhym and rythm so her it is ...

Sing my heavenly loving muses and let me inspire
A friend that in sadness and burning in dark desire
Help me to cheer her up and make her survive
The whole ugly life and slay it with hope's knife
Sing my muses for the one whom always was my inspirer
From the first day I saw her my imagination' heart set in fire
Let her know that although the world is nothing but a misery
If the mighty god with us we don’t have to worry
Sing to her oh heavenly one and let her know
As long as aim with her in the river of darkness she don’t have to row

Life is beautiful if you look at it with the heaven eyes os dot be sad

fnoo Tue Oct 20, 2009 11:28 pm

Hey LULU

I enjoyed the poem though I don't think I fully understood it

Kind of heavey on the violent/dark imagery don't you think ? Rolling Eyes

.......always expecting more from you

Good luck

LULU Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:37 pm

hi fano thank you very much for reading my lines
dark images you said mmmmmm some times i cant hold my self from including such things in writing may be because i feel them around me most of the time in the past but now they are just an ink on the paper hay some of the darkness in my poem is not my fault but the world's